The Writing Loft
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The Writing Loft’s has writing programs and instruction geared for new and experienced writers. We are in the business of teaching writers how to turn their passion for writing into something for which they can be proud; writing that has the probability of being traditionally published. Our programs are designed for writers who are serious about their work. If you are dedicated to your art and wan
01/26/2023
Here are the answers to Group A:
1. If you are headed to the church, pass the old cemetery. (Of course it is separate, and of course you would continue on. It is also probably old if it’s a church cemetery—but that can be debated.)
2. I made sure to ask about the candidate’s platform. ('Ask' means a question.Redundant!)
3. I was told my health was adequate for military service. ('Adequate' is sufficient. Redundant.)
4. The witness was asked to summarize what he saw the night of the robbery. (It would automatically be succinct if it is a summary. BTW, try not to write with adverbs—words that end in -ly. It kills sentence impact.)
5. Ascend the stairs to reach the top. (You can only go up if you ascend. You can’t ascend down. Delete 'up to'.)
----LOOK OUT FOR REDUNDANCIES in your writing. They are a tell-tale hint that you are not a professional writer. ----
01/19/2023
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