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*In advocacy, boost your ethos with exquisite civility*

*By Chinua Asuzu*

Advocacy requires disciplined civility. A brief should address the court with deference, treat opposing parties and counsel with respect, and (in appellate contexts) avoid any pejorative description or innuendo aimed at the trial judge. The advocate’s voice should be cool, tolerant, temperate, and measured.

Brief-writing aims not to slay an enemy but to persuade a legally trained reader. Harsh attacks on the lower court are especially risky because appellate judges may instinctively identify with the judge whose decision is under review. Unfair criticism can therefore provoke judicial impatience or solidarity rather than agreement.

The same restraint applies to opponents, opposing briefs, parties, and witnesses. Nasty, derisive, or mocking comments seldom help. If the opposing side’s conduct or argument is genuinely defective, judges can usually see that without counsel’s theatrical assistance. Denunciation may even arouse sympathy for the target. Ridicule is particularly dangerous because an argument that seems absurd to counsel may appeal to the judge or may only seem absurd because counsel has not fully understood it.

Humor is equally hazardous: its success depends on the recipient, and judges may receive jokes unpredictably or resent them altogether. A brief is not a forum for comic experimentation, sarcasm, or literary display.

Candor is equally important. Justice Ginsburg’s advice to be scrupulously honest is especially forceful when describing what the lower court decided. Appellate judges often read the decision below before reading the briefs. If counsel then mischaracterizes that decision, the court is likely to distrust counsel and become impatient with the argument. Accuracy, fairness, and professional self-command strengthen credibility and preserve judicial attention.

The advocate should avoid diatribes, immature polemics, ad hominem attacks, condescension, sarcasm, insult, and pettiness. Such tactics distract from the merits, suggest weakness, and may even invite sanctions. Gerry Spence’s advice captures the point: avoid scorn and ridicule, use humor cautiously, withhold insult, and respect the opponent.

Litigation is adversarial, but advocacy need not be belligerent. Counsel may contend without being contentious and disagree without being disagreeable. Words such as “obviously,” “clearly,” and “preposterous” often sound like table-pounding substitutes for reasoning. True persuasive strength lies in substance, restraint, accuracy, and respect.

Summarized from Chinua Asuzu, _Brief-Writing Master Plan_ (Partridge, 2022), 366–369.

The Rhetorical Triangle in Written Advocacy

By Chinua Asuzu

Persuasive advocacy does not depend on logic alone. Aristotle’s rhetorical triangle—ethos, logos, and pathos—remains central to litigation and legal writing because every brief speaks simultaneously to reason, credibility, and judgment.

Logos is the substance and structure of the argument. It requires sound legal reasoning, accurate treatment of authority, disciplined organization, and clear expression. A brief must show that the result sought is legally permissible. But legal logic is not self-executing. If the writing is dense, careless, inflated, or disorganized, the judge may miss the point, distrust the advocate, or resist the conclusion. Bad grammar, tortured syntax, excessive emphasis, legalese, needless Latin, overstatement, and typographic shouting all obstruct persuasion. Good writing, by contrast, makes the judge’s task easier. It clarifies the issues, sharpens the argument, and presents the law and facts in a form the court can use.

Ethos is the advocate’s credibility. It is built through candor, competence, civility, fairness, precision, professional discipline, and respect for the court’s intelligence. The advocate’s reputation matters, but ethos can also be projected through the brief itself. A well-written brief signals carefulness, integrity, and mastery. A sloppy brief suggests the opposite. The advocate strengthens ethos by fairly stating the facts, acknowledging adverse points, accurately representing precedent, and avoiding exaggeration. The advocate weakens ethos by misstating law or fact, dodging difficulty, plagiarizing, grandstanding, or adopting a tone that is obsequious, patronizing, or needlessly combative.

Pathos is the audience’s emotional and moral response. Judges are trained professionals, but they remain human readers. They respond to tone, fairness, narrative, proportion, restraint, and the perceived justice of the result. The advocate must therefore do more than show that the preferred result is legally available; the advocate should make that result feel just, sensible, and administrable. This is not a license for manipulation. Emotional appeal in legal writing should be subtle. It should arise from the organization of the facts, the framing of the dispute, the selection of details, and the advocate’s sensitivity to the tribunal.
The three modes of persuasion are interdependent. Weak logic damages credibility. Poor credibility distorts the reception of logic. Bad writing creates negative emotional resistance. A strong brief, therefore, integrates all three. It reasons carefully, speaks with professional authority, and respects the reader’s humanity.

The practical lesson is simple: write for the judge, not for yourself. Reduce unnecessary difficulty. Build trust. A brief should not merely argue; it should help. The advocate who helps the court think clearly is already persuading.

(Summarized from Chinua Asuzu, _Brief-Writing Masterclass_ (Partridge, 2022), 600–647.